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Unreal
so my ap english class is making us do poetry, and we were assigned a topic, mine was zombies. I have to right about 16 poems.[ sonnets, acrostic, blah blah] and i need opinions or help if anyone is past english 9. heres my 16 line rhyming poem. rhyme scheme is abcb defd ghih jklk.

That familiar zombie My related ghoul Who am I now? This isn't cool So much has changed, From my living, walking days. I see the world In all new ways. Looking back on life When my skin and brain Were part of my body, Brings back all the pain. I arise from my tomb, As any phantasm would; Looking back on Life When all was good.

ok so i had to put 3 lit devices in tehre i only got 2 i think, havent really looked. I have Rhetorical question in the 3rd line and "looking back on life" im not sure if thats epimone or anaphora

and.. heres my acrostic word [1 word per letter]. Zap Out My Brain I 'm Evil.

i think that ones fine. and heres my 2 word poem [2 words per line only,] Zombie Dawn Zombie Dawn Flesh decay Morbid stench Night Day Disgruntled, Stressed, Ramshackled pain Dead Inside Dead outside Macabre wish, Lorn afterlife Hunting flesh Cannible Cadaver Tasting life, Smelling Death, Hearing wails Rotton ideas. Transformation alone Feeling gone, Lifeless recluse Zombie Dawn i made only the first part and last part rhyme. and my last one had to use onomatopoeias and description to make readers think of sounds or something, The zombie's gait left a distinguishable scrape, drag, scrape And it's low moan was echoed by a painful groan. The zombie wept for long psat days, The endless time in that cave. Snoring, dozing, grumbling asleep, He waited and waited for that promise to keep. Dragging, sliding, scraping around, The zombie could not stop making sound. He groaned and moaned and gasped for time, He knew he was never again going to be fine. and thats it, this is due friday so any advice/insight is appreciated. Others feel free to post homework problemos.